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Monday, 3 November 2014

Kruz's description writing

The Made Up Monster

Morris is a monster…. a disgusting monster.                                                                                                                                                    His skin is covered in slime.
He uses slugs to scrub his teeth.
He is as ugly as a troll.
He is as dirty as a dump.
He is also sticky from snot and slime.
He is as hairy as a spider.
His breath is as stinky as a pigs pen.
He eats junk like a fat monster.


FROM KRUZ

Kimiora's description writing

Morris the Monster

Morris farts out gas.
Morris has a ugly face.
Morris has a hairy chest and has a hairy body.
Morris has toxic B.O.
Morris has a stinky breath.
Morris has a snotty nose.
Morris lives in stinky home.

By Kimiora


Katie's description writing

Morris the Mankiest Monster

Morris is a filthy Monster .  His skin is an ugly yellow that reminds me of a rotten banana .  He has scabs as black as a rotten old apple.  He has two holes where lives a bright green slimy ooze that is called snot .  He has boils that is as big as  a baseball that is about to explode like a volcano.
Morris has long black nails that needs a cut so badly, his nails are long that he is the next wolverine  movie.   His nails are very long it needs a good cut.  
The smell coming from Morris is very horrible that will make you die in just seconds.  Dead bug are living under his armpits .  He flosses his teeth with fresh slugs straight from under the rocks to make it more tasty.  He eats the poisonous mole from under his toes.  He has a bath in the sewer and washes his hair in the loo.  He might be ugly and gross but thats how he lives….

By  Katie

Jordan's description writing

Morris the Stinky Monster

Morris is a stinky, yukky monster. He lives in a house full of poo and he smells bad.
Morris is as stinky as poo. Morris also takes a shower out of snail slime and has a hairy chest.
Then he makes a ugly slime and makes a juicy snail drink.  He smells like toxic poo.
He feels like he just got out of dung.  Morris farts out gas and has a food growing out of his pants.
He smells like B.O.

By Jordan

Anna's description writing

Morris the Mankiest Monster

Morris is the ugly looking monster.  He will love you so you love him back and he is so stupid.  He is so fat that no one will like him and his ugly face is so ugly and stupid and ugly.  He can not stop being so, so, so ugly that no one will buy him anything at all.  He is as stink as a boy and girl . He will not buy a boy and girl.  He will be so ugly and so like boys and girls and no one will like Morris the Mankiest Monster. He will be so upset at you and he will be so mean to you and he will be mean to you back so do not be bad to Morris so he will come and kiss you good bye.

By Anna




Anaru's description writing

Morris the Monster
Morris is a monster.  He is an fat,gross and smelly monster.  Morris smells like dead rotten fish.  It will make you puke.  He is as heavy as two cars.  He is so gross. He lives in a house full of dung.  Morris reminds me of a fat, smelly ogre.  The smell coming from Morris is disgusting.   Morris smells so bad his smell will make you faint.  Morris has got the worlds worst B.O.  The smell coming from Morris is so bad it smells like a toxic gas.  Morris’s skin feels very rough.  Morris also feels yuk and like slime.   If you feel his back it will feel sharp and it will feel sour.  When you feel under his armpits you will feel like dead and slimy bugs


By Anaru

Our Certificate Winner

This week our very deserving certificate receiver was Avesulu.  She received her certificate for using great language features in her description writing.  Keep checking back for when she publishes her work so you can check it out!

Well done Sulu, keep up the good work!